I've been compiling the RP saves of the current Niflheim plot and trying my best to get them in order and formatted to be readable. There's still a lot of gaps and whatnot, but I've got a tentative three chapters of text, approximately 200 pages worth of story. I think the plot is getting to be quite interesting, even reading from outside of it, and since some people showed interest in reading some of the scenes (like the Aija/Hikali one) they're all in there now!
Remember these are pretty much formatted IM RP's, not a novel written by one person. This means various writing styles, spelling and grammar mistakes abound.
Yay for the plot! ^////^ *so much fun* *hugs Aija and Kali* XP
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A lot of people don't even seem to read these. If you are reading this, congrats. You have just wasted a couple seconds of your life. Have some cake.
What I think? D: Ohnoes reviews. *no good at them*
The Aija/Kali scene was really touching though, from what I gathered she isn't too comfortable with touching/hugging people, and yet she fell asleep on his lap anyway. *fangirl moment* Yes, I realize they're 12 and 14, so fangirling must be kept to a minimal.
And Drestal was awesome, how Aija cared for him, silly suicidal Drestal. Thinking best was to get rid of himself so he wouldn't hurt Aija, that was also really touching and all. And Tookei was awesome, I loved him so much. He and Hikali seemed to care for each other alot, like close friends. And though I forget the Yurble's name (started with L), I both liked and disliked him. He's awesome what with the healing and all, but then there's the torture chamber deal that made me wince- which was good, because that's probably what you all were going for, whomever roleplayed him.
Annnd. Um.
I liked it. A lot. Forever.
You're going to keep posting as the plot goes on, I hope? As you reach each 'chapter' end, anyway? I would love to follow up on this.
I will. I just got one of the missing scenes that'll deepen the Dee/Hikali relationship, it's actually the main intro for that little spy maid, and I have some more Lohho for the Kinderheim chapter X3
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A lot of people don't even seem to read these. If you are reading this, congrats. You have just wasted a couple seconds of your life. Have some cake.
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BAW
(humbug)
I was one of the ones wanting to read the Aija/Hikali scene, so I'm reading this. No worries about how it's written/formatted, it's fine to me.
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Tsukino Hikaru
mystarseed.com
The Aija/Kali scene was really touching though, from what I gathered she isn't too comfortable with touching/hugging people, and yet she fell asleep on his lap anyway. *fangirl moment* Yes, I realize they're 12 and 14, so fangirling must be kept to a minimal.
And Drestal was awesome, how Aija cared for him, silly suicidal Drestal. Thinking best was to get rid of himself so he wouldn't hurt Aija, that was also really touching and all. And Tookei was awesome, I loved him so much. He and Hikali seemed to care for each other alot, like close friends. And though I forget the Yurble's name (started with L), I both liked and disliked him. He's awesome what with the healing and all, but then there's the torture chamber deal that made me wince- which was good, because that's probably what you all were going for, whomever roleplayed him.
Annnd. Um.
I liked it. A lot. Forever.
You're going to keep posting as the plot goes on, I hope? As you reach each 'chapter' end, anyway? I would love to follow up on this.
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Tsukino Hikaru
mystarseed.com
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